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Priyee's avatar

In this young you have experience such highs and lows, knowing all the taste of life worst,pain almost broken all this happened before the beautiful arrives must be God knows you only have capacity to go through all this lessons you need to learn might be craving you sharp,bitter or mold to shine like how diamond goes through process I do understand the emotions that has gone with such circumstances with the people you adored, admired that didn't stay to you near but feelings stays and it's hard to bury in heart forever cause they do crawl back in our presence I may not relate this to fully cause every life has its own pace of situations to be witness but I fully blown away being in your shoe and it's hard but your story might need this lessons maybe the whole book of your personality is incomplete without this and I know you are high intellectual person you do know how to cope of all this and choosing life even ordinary next day in morning and you will do you need to complete your story your own book, And it's written very very well please be this vulnerable even if many strange eyes struck here while reading you shouldn't bother you okkay let people know all your raw 🌻

Vedanshi's avatar

I love this piece! The voice you captured is really beautiful and lowk would resonate with a lot of people. Keep writing <3

Saddhana Velpari's avatar

two words: HOLY FUCK. this is beautiful. haunting. eery and yet I see your pain. the narrative was different to what I usually read on the internet. it's fresh and oh so beautiful. absolutely insane post I loved this so much. sending love and hugs:)

Molluty Writes's avatar

This is devastatingly beautiful. Your words carry so much pain and love at once. Please take care of yourself. 🤍

dhruvi's avatar

legit physically something happened to me while reading it, some sort of panic maybe;

(you were vulnerable without being weak)

(i def dont wanna comment that it's awesome, well written, etc, cz the writing is no doubt best, but such posts deserves much more than these compliments.

don't ever lose yourself, im glad im your sub)

(im out of words currently or w full of them)

Ameliorating A's avatar

Damn. My mind went numb reading this. I hope you're doing okay🫂

This was just too painful to read. I'm speechless honestly.

Take care man 🫂🥺

♡Shrey!!'s avatar

Dayum, the writing is so good while writing this comment, I can still feel the intensity of your feelings. Imma honestly out of words after reading your article, great work akash :)

Apryl's avatar

This is a masterpiece.

I'll preserve this forever in my mind

Ethelfled's avatar

I'm at lose of words!

Omnia's avatar

Wait, was this a dream or a memory? Think I need to reread!

Puli. Purushotham's avatar

Your narrative went on like a screen play.

Splendid .

Grandfather character intermittently is apt.

Naira lune ✨'s avatar

Mic drop !!! It just went on and on ....crazy hell man . 🙌🏻

Ananya Sharma's avatar

I'm speechless...

Nanoheart's avatar

I think if you look closely there are two people sitting on the floor. You and me………….

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Nanoheart's avatar

You do that. I was too numb after reading this.