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Ameliorating A's avatar

I honestly felt like why you have written it in such a way that these miseries are getting solved by watching a tree and is not devastating a person completely. But after reading the comments I understood that it was probably meant that way that it feels blank and things hurt but some small anchors help in moving through the loss. The writing was so good man. Really amazing and well written!!

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Nov 12
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Ameliorating A's avatar

It's my pleasure :)) This does makes sense.

Priyee's avatar

What a circumstances building up one by one, A heavy build up in mind while reading this. You have written this piece very strong could relate how one can go through in this circumstances.

phil's avatar

This was haunting and so well written. it made me feel super emotional well done!!

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Nov 6
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phil's avatar

ofc anytime it was beautiful

Nia's avatar

'Stared at the ceiling after reading' beautiful 💗

shavali.'s avatar

I was imagining everything what was written here, tenderly beautiful.

Afreen's avatar

This is so hauntingly beautiful like those chain of events were a total emotional rollercoaster and the subtle imagery that it is providing could be just felt through. A very well written piece indeed!!